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PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 6:36 pm    Post subject: my original work Reply with quote

Well...might as well start with the newer of the 2 RPGs

Destiny: Shattered Entity (currently not complete, even main character roster)

Yokai: The sub-human warrior
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo4.jpg

Aria Akemi: The tragic priestess
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo3.jpg

Nasiri: The shape shifting anthromorph
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo15.jpg

Dimeria: The hi-tech vigilante
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo16.jpg

Asp: The armor-clad princess
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo17.jpg

Sagro: The perverted healer
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo18.jpg

Hana: The clueless chosen
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo31.jpg

Constolis: The Deity (villian)
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo32.jpg




Destiny: Legacy of the Mage

Duv: The chosen
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo37.jpg
a halfling (half angel, half demon. only 1 born every 1000 years) who is destined to awaken via sacrifice of the beast Dagun, which is meant to be a savior to the world, or destroyer, depending on the intentions of the one who merges with it (only a halfling can). She was kidnapped by the empire and tested on in hopes of creating a way to have the Empire's leader Mordecai to take control of dagun without dying (Mordecai is really a brain in control of many clones.) She escaped and had to stay hidden. Halflings have an ability to absorb features of people who's souls they absorb, thus she changes her appearance by killing people. She had to do so to stay alive but she the guilt really gets to her so she succumbs to drinking and drugs. She is the one who killed the original Vahren and clings onto the new one for security. because she's spent her whole life running, she never had any real education, which she is embarrassed about.

Lena: The tortured soul
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo38.jpg
princess of Tur, a nation under military control of teh empirial city. In her past, her lover, Vahren had to leave for a new mission and she never saw him again. Then, to establish a friendly relation with the empire, her father married her off to someone high up in the empire. One day she escaped and met someone that looked very familiar to Vahren and had amnesia, so she decides to make him vahren and her lover. She is really emotional and will do almost anything to keep the new Vahren by her side, including trying to kill Duv.

Varanus: The genetically altered
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo33.jpg
A demon captured and put into Site C, a secret expirmental lab, despite the war ending and all prisoners suppossibly released. His wings ripped off and his genetic composition changed, he will turn into a much feircer and out of control beast for a few momments when his collar comes off. He also has retractible blades that slide in and out of his arms for weapons. he is an unrelenting soldier and is rarely hesitent or scared. There is a slight hinting at him being gay, but any sort of gay joke always ends up with him killing the person in very violent ways. He also completly hates leru and will threaten to kill him if he gets too close. Although he eventually becomes tolerant and teaches him how to not become as hezitent. he is driven by war and finds it uncomfortable and terrifying to live without it, which originally drove him back out to leave his lover in Lai Me. He seems regretting doing so and wishes he'd been there to stop it's destruction.

Leru: The regretful sharpshooter
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo36.jpg
A soldier from Rah, a nation in an alliance with the Empire (but the king does hope for a way to end it) and currently the only non-empire member of teh special unit team. he's young and inexperienced in battle, usually hesitent when put in a troubling situation. He was once part of a mission to Lai Me in search of a Dagun artifact where he had to kill many innocents, something that haunts him, making him question what he really does is right; something that gets him outcasted from the other members.

Xaxi: The rejected royalty
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo35.jpg
A princess of Mizu, a port country that is naturally in alliance with the empire. Always pretending to be something she's not, she eventually had to flee the country she loved when it came time for her to have to choose a male suitor (lesbian. Considered an offense and usually death sentenced.) Exhiled from her own country, she found refuge in Veca, the demon empire, where she began a nursing career. She however becomes an empire special unit secretivly in hopes that it will allow her back into the country she loves and be accepted once again. She has a crush on Duv because she resembles someone she once knew (all we know about this mysterious female) and usually breaks down in tears when near her.

Faust: The vengeful lover (villian. This one is still crap but I don't feel like redrawing it)
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo5.jpg
another halfling who at one point fell in love with the original Mordecai's daughter, Sara. fleeing teh war they lived in exile. But one day the Empire found them. Killing Sara and nearly killing him, faust went insane and became determined to destroy those who created this class system of angels demons and humans (all teh same species originally as we find out later. Angels are teh top teir who rule the empire, humans elow, and demons rebelled thus making them the lowest teir. I know this is not biblically "correct"). He doesn't wish to destroy all angels and humans, just control them with Dagun for a forced peace, so noone can feel the sadness of going through what he had to. He has absorbed so many souls that he can split himself into multiple beings, thus being able to control dagun and still walk around as himself, or morph between the two forms.(the villian)

Vahren: The amnesia-cursed soldier
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo34.jpg
An angel with amnesia who pretends to be human because he fears what the group would think. Because of his amnesia he sees the injustice but wonders if he was once part of it when he was born into it. had he not had amnesia, would he be trying to kill the group is a question that goes through his mind. He teaches Duv to read and gets caught up in a love triangle between Duv and Lena. But then the shocker occurs; vahren really never had amnesia, it's one of the alt forms of Faust, keeping tabs on the group. he kills Lena and then attempts to kill Duv. After refoprming with the other Fausts, the true Faust imerges and we have the final battle between the group and Faust. of course the group wins and Duv seems saddened by Lena's death among other things. It seems Duv sort of understands what was really going on in Faust's mind.

Dagun Soul: The beast of legend
http://i49.photobucket.com/albums/f270/VRaptorX/Photo6.jpg
(note: the final form of the final boss. I just think it's really odd)
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 6:56 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

First one I really like.

The rest... the poses look a little stiff, but I do like the creativity you've put into the wardrobe.

You practice on drawing these guys, right?
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 7:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yeah I practice. You wouldn't imagine how many outfits Yokai wentthrough before I got that. At some points he looked more like that "gothic geisha" in Red Steel.


And Aria looks stiff? Hmm...I was trying to get the casting a spell look. You know how they always spread open right at the end of the cast....that and I wanted to make sure people realize there is that thing over her top (kimono top and then that.)
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 30, 2007 7:27 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

oh crap.....I forgot the kimono top! I just have the thing over it.

*smacks head*
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 12:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well, you already know what I think. Good Job, David.
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PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 12:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yeah, the stiffness is more around the shoulders and limb joints more than anything.
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK...two new characters added, Dimeria and Nasiri
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PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 7:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I like Dimeria's pose. Nice work.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 9:53 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

OK...added 2 new characters (3rd one may be axed from plot) for Shattered Entity and bios for the Legacy of the Mage characters.
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2007 11:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Fantabulous. I think I may have missed this: are you planning on writing these people out or drawing a comic?



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